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Angelic SalvationWhen I was at the end of myself, And drowning in despair, Ready to end it all- I turned and you were there.Angelic Salvation
When I was off the narrow path, Falling through the sinking sand, Waiting for my life to end, I looked up and saw your hand.
Like and angel, you reached out, And saved me from myself. Sent to me from Heaven, You pulled me from my hell.
Lying in your arms now, Feels like coming home. Your kiss breathed life back into me, And warmed my heart and soul.
Your loving wings envelope me, Passion rises within. M
--MY OBSESSION--I bought some Obsession at the mall The lady told me to buy it all So I did, and I stink, and that\'s the end Of my Obsession poem... Thanks for listening, my Friend--MY OBSESSION--
-Last Forever-Remember that September stroll Along the pier at dusk? How our laughter died down And I reached for your hand And you let me take it? I smiled at you And you looked at me I wanted to stay like that forever...-Last Forever-
That was the beginning
Of the best thing in my life ... being with you. So many memories Float through my mind Your beautiful face, Your soft gentle touch Your kisses that electrified me
Why did it end? Where did you go? I\'ve been running for so long now Trying to forget What I\'ve loved and lost I
I CAN SEEI can see you weeping, You don’t realize that I’m there. Watching from the shadows In an unblinking stare..I CAN SEE
I can hear you shouting, Though I do not know the words. They’re frightening and confusing, I’d rather not have heard.
I can see your scars, Though you’ve hidden them quite well. I know they are a secret I’m not supposed to tell.
I can hear the footsteps Coming down the hall I know that Daddy hurts you, Mama, I’ve seen it all.
The Guardian AnGelI met you in the darkness You were in so much pain Your so beautiful With your poison ivy eyes I try to hold you Ill fly you to a safe place I thought I could be with you But you are not aloneThe Guardian AnGel
I met you in the ice You were shivering and crying Your so beautiful With your bleeding red hair I try to fly you away I thought I could take you to the promise land But Im missing one wing
And I feel your pain It steals my broken heart You became my friend nothing more Its your bleeding heart I want to heal Your like the heali
Disgusting MeDisgusting MeDisgusting Me
My eyes were adrift But caught by the sight Of his pathetic countenance A disgusting visage Of gargoyle like appearance
His face twists and distorts Into that pretentious Piss-colored and filth encrusted fake grin And shivers of disgust rocket Down my spine
My eyes lock with his For the barest of moments The dull sheen of blue Purveying a sense of cowardice And absolute lack of intelligence
But in that moment That fleeting second past I caught a glimmer A slight glimpse Of his tortur
Broken Home-Broken LifeEyes that have seen Too much hate Heart that has felt so much pain Ears that have heard Such stinging remarks It’s more than a soul can containBroken Home-Broken Life
So helpless, so hopeless So scared and alone Little boy in a hell Concealed as a home
No tender affection Between mother and son Only “I hate you”s This child’s misfortune
And he tries to be good But his spirit’s been broken By the lack of love And the hurtful words spoken
If only someone had said “I love you” If only someone had cared Perhaps he wouldn’t
what a lie
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I wish u wern't so busy now-a-days. Feels like i lost a
brother
Oh well, i'll just come to CA and stalk u in the bushes
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Daniel (realitysquared)
Copyright & Etiquette Administration Manager,
Community Operations Division,
deviantART Inc.
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Hablas Español? :iconla-ch:
Mexicano? :iconmexicanos:
1 week ban.
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Daniel (realitysquared)
Copyright & Etiquette Administration Manager,
Community Operations Division,
deviantART Inc.
The best part is that she brings that up with like every poem. My stuff is cliche as fuck and yet I still got 2 of them published, it's not a real critique under most circumstances. (I say most, because sometimes it is just REALLY annoying, but usually it's ok.)
And I read your poem and thought it was pretty good. A little cliche but WHO CARES?
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How to make cute little icons of people show up in your journal and siggy.
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"If your gonna weep keep it from sunshine, so no one sees.
I wont cry, above all things boy be a man"-Type O Negative
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"If your gonna weep keep it from sunshine, so no one sees.
I wont cry, above all things boy be a man"-Type O Negative
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